i took your guy’s advice: how did I do?

I took your guy's notes about fermenting and I did more research independently. im very happy with how this batch came out !!! I even gave the one in the first picture to my mother in law,, and she loved it !!! thank you so much,, if there's anything else I can improve on,, I'd appreciate it if you let me know☺️

(recipe: https://youtu.be/yygOrmQ2Y9s?si=CqS6f7oijm1004bC)