The upper swoosh of purée is too much. Just go with the lower left one. Maybe swoosh a bit tidier?
Also not sure about the brown blob. How about some artful dots?
Not too sure about the pearls either, a lot of yellow. Maybe hit em with a bit of turmeric to make the yellow pop? Or get some red/ pink in there, somehow.
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The upper swoosh of purée is too much. Just go with the lower left one. Maybe swoosh a bit tidier?
Also not sure about the brown blob. How about some artful dots?
Not too sure about the pearls either, a lot of yellow. Maybe hit em with a bit of turmeric to make the yellow pop? Or get some red/ pink in there, somehow.
Good negative space, fish looks tasty!